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returntothepit >> discuss >> A girl wrote a poem and I think it's about me... by AUTOPSY_666 on Aug 11,2008 3:52am

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Aug 11,2008 3:52am

A Moth to a Flame

She danced wildly for him.
Oh, what a show to behold !
Drawing him near with her beauty,
Her aura, her heat.

He couldn't resist,
This wonder he'd seen.
The one he'd longed for,
From a past time before.

They met against a blanket of night.
She shined ever brightly,
He couldn't resist temptation.
It was then, that they met once again.

She accepted him apprehensively,
Wondering where he had been.
Who else had danced for him?
Did he linger with enjoyment?

Forgetting her force,
Her God-given fury,
She let him in to her world.
He was more than delighted !

Ever so gentle, she cradled him.
He lye comfortably in her warmth.
She knew he would be gone soon,
But she cared not for future reference.

Enjoying the hum of his voice, the buzz.
All was perfect here in this moment.
The fuzz upon his wing, color in his eyes.
She lost herself in the beauty of him.

Unaware of his natural intention,
This flame embraced this insect.
Forgetful of previous losses,
She thought that he would forever be.

Unaware of his past flames,
She welcomed this moth into her world.
Like opening the door for a stranger,
She let him in again.

This passionate flame loved hard,
Ill intentions from the past put aside,
She trusted him now for some reason,
Her loneliness she could not hide.

The stay of this moth would be short.
Boredom would soon set in.
He would tire of her light,
Her warmth and her embrace.

Soon there will come a new flame,
One that will burn bright, with more fury.
He will flutter to this newcomer,
And love her just the same.

Alone she remains now.
He has flown to another,
Just as his nature intended.
She will never burn as bright,

As she did with him that night.

post by anonymous at Aug 11,2008 5:45am

You're so full of yourself. Like every stripper gets a clitoral boner when she gives you a lap dance then writes poetry about it.

post by Kadoogalicious at Aug 11,2008 6:16am

I...I think this is about ME , maaaaaaan. But...like...it's about EVERYbody, too, y'know?

post by Kadooganaut at Aug 11,2008 8:36am

I wrote a poem for you, too, Dwyer:

Dwyer is baaaaaaaald
Dwyer is ballllllllllllllld
DwyerisbaldDwyerisbaldDwyerisbald
DwyerisbaldDwyerisbaldDwyerisbald
Dwyer is bald - Dwyer is bald - Dwyer is bald
Bald
Baaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllld

post by Yeti at Aug 11,2008 10:46am

my ego has not been properly massaged yet today.

post by DestroyYouAlot

at Aug 11,2008 11:03am

It doesn't mention "oddly pursed lips" anywhere in there.

post by slymo

at Aug 11,2008 11:28am

8===D~~~~

post by Conservationist

at Aug 11,2008 11:32am

AUTOPSY_666 said	[orig][quote]
He couldn't resist temptation.

post by markfuckingrichards

at Aug 11,2008 11:48am

If a girl ever wrote a poem like that for me I'd tell her to stop wasting her time and do the goddamn dishes.

post by brian_dc

at Aug 11,2008 11:50am

that poem is not a sandwich and a beer...I don't care.

post by markfuckingrichards

at Aug 11,2008 12:04pm

That poem isn't going to clean the house or give me a blowjob, so light yourself on fire.

post by orgymaggotfeast

at Aug 11,2008 1:25pm

markfuckingrichards said	[orig][quote]
If a girl ever wrote a poem like that for me I'd tell her to stop wasting her time and do the goddamn dishes.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

mark knows how to talk to girls, haha
i love it

post by orgymaggotfeast

at Aug 11,2008 1:26pm

markfuckingrichards said	[orig][quote]
That poem isn't going to clean the house or give me a blowjob, so light yourself on fire.

further brilliance -l-

post by Murph

at Aug 11,2008 2:58pm

brian_dc said	[orig][quote]
that poem is not a sandwich and a beer...I don't care.

BEERS > QUEERS.

post by MarkFuckingRichards

at Aug 11,2008 5:17pm

Thank you Orgy. I am a real man. You are clearly also a real man.

post by hyper_sludge at Aug 11,2008 5:18pm

gay

post by archaeon at Aug 11,2008 5:27pm

I wonder if anyone actually read that?

post by MarkFuckingRichards

at Aug 11,2008 5:32pm

I read it while I was stuck in traffic due to a brutal car accident on 93. That is the only reason I read it.

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Aug 13,2008 2:05pm

Kadooganaut said	[orig][quote]
Dwyer is bald and sexy

post by ORGYMFATWORK at Aug 13,2008 4:15pm

MarkFuckingRichards said	[orig][quote]
Thank you Orgy. I am a real man. You are clearly also a real man.

-l-

post by hyper_sludge at Aug 13,2008 6:10pm

damn dude you got a huge fuckin' melon. that woman looks like she fell out of Dimebag's girlfriend's double chin.

post by SlypKnawt at Aug 14,2008 12:01am

AUTOPSY_666 said

[orig][quote]

Kadooganaut said	[orig][quote]
Dwyer is bald and sexy

dang whut is with this guys lips! he looks like some model gayfag like hes pursing his lips like those guidos. i dunno but he friggen looks way gayer than average to me. ok im out gNight!

post by BenFo at Aug 14,2008 12:37am

too long; didn't read

post by pam

at Aug 14,2008 2:41am

markfuckingrichards said	[orig][quote]
If a girl ever wrote a poem like that for me I'd tell her to stop wasting her time and do the goddamn dishes.

Comments like that really make up for you being I-talian. <3

post by pam

at Aug 14,2008 2:43am

hyper_sludge said	[orig][quote]
that woman looks like she fell out of Dimebag's girlfriend's double chin.

post by ORGYMFATWORK at Aug 14,2008 10:19am

this whole conversation reminds me of one of the funniest things any woman has ever said (in my opinion)

the old bass player of I.W.E.I.P.H. (suzie) wrote "The back of your hand.... i know my place (or something along those lines) in the "who i'd like to meet" section of her myspace page

post by RichHorror

at Aug 14,2008 10:21am

The continual hate of Dwyer's lips is cracking me up.

post by Kadooganaut at Aug 14,2008 11:42am

AUTOPSY_666 said

[orig][quote]

Kadooganaut said	[orig][quote]
Dwyer's lady friend is probably balding and sex-starved

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Aug 14,2008 12:21pm

RichHorror said	[orig][quote]
The continual hate of Dwyer's lips is cracking me up.

*Smootch*

post by RichHorror

at Aug 14,2008 12:23pm

It's just such a random thing to be fixated on. Creeps.

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Aug 14,2008 1:19pm

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Aug 31,2008 3:13am

The torture in your eyes
It eats my soul alive
To be one with you
In this life or the next

I see what I need
Far beyond my reach
All you have to offer
Lessons you yearn to teach

A generous heart you have
Bitter-sweet to taste
Memories I hold dear
Our time I cannot erase

May you never flee from me
Always stay close to home
Never doubt my love for you
It is my heart that you own

Time can only tell and see
What's in store for you and me
Shall we lay side by side
In this beautiful graveyard of life

I bend the toughest steel
Walk the longest mile
Defy all of my morals
Just to lay with you awhile

Your eyes, I hope they see
All the love for you, in me
May you never take a second glance
At our sweet, black heart romance

Many years have come and gone
Yet, here we are together again
I value you more than you know
I see you as more than a friend

Don't ever take a step away
Never leave me here alone
I said it before, and I'll say it again
It is my heart that you own

post by Kadooganaut at Aug 31,2008 8:27am

AUTOPSY_666 said

[orig][quote]

The torture in your lips
It eats my lips alive
To be one with your lips
In this lips or the next

I see what I need
Far beyond my lips
All you have to offer
lips you yearn to teach

generous lips you have
Bitter-sweet to taste
Memories I hold dear
yOur lips I cannot erase

May your lips never flee from me
Always stay close to home
Never doubt my lips for you
It is my lips that you own

Time can only tell and see
What's in store for you and me
Shall we lay side by side
In this beautiful graveyard of life

I bend the toughest steel
Walk the longest mile
Defy all of my morals
Just to lay with you awhile

Your eyes, I hope they see
All the love for you, in me
May you never take a second glance
At our sweet, black heart romance

Many years have come and gone
Yet, here we are together again
I value you more than you know
I see you as more than a friend

Don't ever take a step away
Never leave me here alone
I said it before, and I'll say it again
It is my heart that you own

okay that's enough for me

post by zenerik NLI OMFGZ at Aug 31,2008 11:40am

"Flame to the Moth"

I long for the summer
I long for the sun
gently touching my face
I’ll open my eyes
let it burn every splinter
unleash desert storms
on its way to my heart
and I had this coming
every day of my life
this is where I stop fighting
eyes open wide
you took this blade
and cut a wreck
and in one blow
laid bare your neck
where did we go wrong?
I once had blue eyes
hungry and wise
now they are black from this
dark age of lies
we’re all privatized
industrialized
we capitalize on the beams in our
eyes
it’s all in the eyes
eyes - tearing with sorrow
burning with anger and passion and lust
the swift wind of thought
of wildness and laughter
the soil of defiance
the firm ground of trust
(we had this coming - every day of our lives)
(we should start fighting for eyes open wide)
but I am put here
in this world gone insane
where everything’s for sale
from nature, over stars down to DNA
then I can gladly say
that I’d be the first to break that norm
any day
any way
and the last to join the ranks
to hunt down the Daily Threat
or any other brand of prey
you took this blade
and cut a wreck
and in one blow
laid bare your neck
where did we go wrong?
we once had blue eyes
probing the skies
now they are blackened
from this modern life
all privatized
industrialized
a failure
offensive and sore to the eye
one small step for man
maybe this time I’ll fly
and if I hit the ground
it’s the way we all die
we are wrecks of the cut
soups of the season
with dollar sign scars
from this dark age of treason
we all know how to cry
then we learn how to smile
how to smile
we’re all telling the truth
tell us the truth!
then we learn how to lie
and oh, how we lie
how we
lie
when you bow your heads tomorrow
at the world we build today
I want you to remember
that I stood my ground
and said no
(say no)
I said no...
say no!

post by zenerik NLI OMFGZ at Aug 31,2008 11:45am

"Like Moths to Flame"

once again these bitter herbs
the perfect compliment to all your cryptic words
I nod but don't know what to say, but I know you
and I believe you're who you say you are so I?

I will follow you, lay down my life
I would die for you, this very night

once again the bread and wine
but it seems the meanings may be deeper still this time
and you surprised me when you said I'd fall away, don't you know me
I could never be ashamed of you, no I?

I've never been this cold, the fire's gravity compels
like planets cling to sol, I feel my orbit start to fail
like moths to flame I come, too close and all my oaths are burned
as stars begin to run, all my accusers take their turn
and calling curses down, from my lips lies like poison spill
and then that awful sound, the sound of prophesy fulfilled
and then I met your eyes, and I remember everything
and something in me dies, the night that I betrayed my king

post by archaeon at Aug 31,2008 12:01pm

omgzthrice

post by IllinoisEnemaBradness at Aug 31,2008 3:04pm

Lollipop lollipop
Oh lolli lolli lolli
Lollipop lollipop.....

Call my baby lollipop
Tell you why
His kiss is sweeter than an apple pie
And when he does his shaky rockin' dance
Man, I haven't got a chance

I call him
Lollipop lollipop
Oh lolli lolli lolli
Lollipop lollipop.....

Sweeter than candy on a stick
Huckleberry, chimry or lime
If you had a choice
He'd be your pick
But lollipop is mine

Lollipop lollipop
Oh lolli lolli lolli
Lollipop lollipop.....

Crazy way he thrills me
Tell you why
Just like a lightning from the sky
He loves to kiss me till I can't see straight
GEE, MY LOLLIPOP IS GREAT

I call him
Lollipop lollipop
Oh lolli lolli lolli
Lollipop lollipop.....

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Sep 6,2008 7:18am

My soul, it screams as I cry for you
Here I lay, as I die for you
I wrapped you up, kept you near
Died for you, as I laid here...

Memories flood my mind
As I lay here in this bed
Recalling all of your love
The beautiful things you'd said

Too far gone to keep you here
Words you'd said, sweet to my ear
I know I'll never hear them again
Before I die, I'll remember them, friend

You gave me all of your heart and love
I offered you my sweet life
But I counted on the heavens above
I ignored the strength though all the strife

Deterred from what was right
I chose this path to walk
Was blind to see your love for me
Much too busy to talk

I wish I'd know this day was near
Despite my ignorance, lack of fear
I would hold you close to me again
Call you more than just a friend

So alone I wait and suffer
My death is drawing near
And here you are at my side
All of these feelings I continue to hide

When I am gone you'll read them all
From page to page you'll see
There was more than a life and struggle
This was all to you, from me

post by the_taste_of_cigarettes

at Sep 6,2008 8:19am

Dwyer, Dwyer
Once a liar
Told me we would be
Together forever with thee
But now the time has passed
For you have raped my ass
And shitting blood is now
I long to show you how

post by corpus_colostomy at Sep 6,2008 9:02am

post by Kadooganaut at Sep 6,2008 10:48am

the_taste_of_cigarettes said	[orig][quote]
Dwyer, Dwyer Once a liar Told me we would be Together forever with thee But now the time has passed For you have raped my ass And shitting blood is now I long to show you how

that was deep, man. cause it's like, the blood-shitting stands for like, your heart, yknow? and like the rape is what the GOVERNEMTNTN does to us yknow? !@121

post by MarkFuckingRichards

at Sep 6,2008 10:58am

This wins the gayest thread on the entire internet award.

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Dec 20,2008 11:49pm edited Dec 20,2008 11:52pm

Cut me wide and watch me bleed
Drink this wine; devour me .
Long the haul, and hard, the fight
Torment in giving you up tonight.

Tangled up in webs you weave
Lies you told, I longed to believe.
In this despair I drink my share;
Destroy myself, you wouldn't care.

I cannot bow down to what is beneath me
In passion and love, you dishonor and deceive me
Too far gone… no looking back
My hearts gone cold, and my souls run black

Making sweet love to this pint of rum
Searching my mind for the things gone wrong
Erasing the visions of your sweet face
Twisting and turning in pain and angst

Numb to the bone, I sit here and bleed
Reflecting on the times that I let you feed
Your grace and charm had sucked me in
But oh, not now, not ever again.

Benevolent, my love, and strong, my will
The things I did for you… I killed
Too ignorant and too blind to believe
For you and your love, I disposed of the seed

Regret, it haunts me evermore
I was your whore, I was naive
Drink the blood that I've spilled
Swallow the guilt, uneasy to receive

My hands behind my back… in this love
I try to preserve and attack, in this love
Yet you will not let me leave in peace
In torture I pray , to above for release .

May you fall to your knees in this evil reign
Suffer and die, in torture and in vein
For I will never see you again
Goodbye to you , my Godforsaken friend.

- - -

I am as I am

What you see is what you get

A bitter soul unraveling

Living without regret

Standing before you

Lying to your face

I see nothing wrong

With a dishonest disgrace

Far from the normal

That will always be me

Angelic in the presence

The Devil in discrete

Love me or hate me

The choice is always yours

As I’m laughing at your jokes

I’m finding you a bore

Some would call me two faced

Others a work of art

Just acknowledge as you speak to me

I had your number from the start

Am I the fake one

Or is it you

Writing checks you cant cash

Biting more than you can chew

Judge me as you will

But I’m honest from the start

Try to break my will

And I will break your heart

I always stand alone

You just find me here

In solitude and sorrow

I lend the friendly ear

I don’t hear what you’re saying

Truth is I never will

Could care less about your problems

Mine linger with me still

post by MarkFuckingRichards

at Dec 21,2008 1:43am

Why.

post by the_reverend

at Dec 21,2008 8:30am

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Dec 23,2008 2:13pm

post by brian_dc

at Dec 23,2008 2:16pm

[Sep 6,2008 10:58am - MarkFuckingRichards]
This wins the gayest thread on the entire internet award.

post by AUTOPSY_666

at Jan 6,2009 2:03pm edited Jan 6,2009 8:28pm

Cold and silent
Soiled face, I will wash it all away, with my love
That's all she's ever needed, from me
It's my time, to mother, one of my own, in my life
I am so alone, left with no one, in my life
I'm so alone

Sheltered life, innocence
Insulated memories, spark reflections in my head
Duality in my consciousness
Caught in the war of hemispheres
Between the love lost in my head
Mommy do you still live inside of me?
I'm so lost in my life without any guiding
Protected me my whole life from everything
Nailed shut the doors to the shrine
To screen your dead eyes from me and my sickness
Mutilate and sew my new clothes for masquerading
Aprons of flesh corpse scalped hair with skin upon my face

Deliver the remains from her womb of earth
Prep the rack and tie up for new love's rebirth
Covert understanding of novice surgery
I'll focus concentration and only take just what I need
For sickness I'm masticating
Dancing and masturbating
Celebrate in fields of night with skin upon my face

If I soak my hands in others blood, am I sick?
If I wash my hands in others blood, am I sick?
If I drench myself in others blood, am I sick?
If I bathe myself in others blood

Blame mother for the sickness
Mutilate and sew my new clothes for masquerading
Aprons of flesh corpse scalped hair with skin upon my face
Dance and masturbate in night light by myself

Nothing is left for me to gain, they're coming to take me far away

Life, submissiveness,
Hypnotizing the ignorant
A little boy's best friend's always his mother
At least that's what she said
Life of a simple man
Taught that everyone else is dirty
And their love is meaningless

Life, submissiveness,
Hypnotizing the ignorant
A little boy's best friend's always his mother
At least that's what she said
Life of a simple man
Taught that everyone else is dirty
And their love is meaningless
I'm so soiled
Life of a simple man
Taught that everyone else is dirty
And their love is meaningless
I'm so soiled
Life of a simple man
Taught that everyone else is dirty
And their love is meaningless
I'm so soiled
Soiled

post by brian_dc

at Jan 6,2009 2:36pm

[Dec 23,2008 2:16pm - brian_dc]
[Sep 6,2008 10:58am - MarkFuckingRichards]
This wins the gayest thread on the entire internet award.

post by SkinSandwich at Jan 6,2009 3:11pm

Man, you are fucking full of yourself.

post by Yeti at Jan 6,2009 3:32pm

post by DestroyYouAlot

at Jan 6,2009 3:35pm

so i'm back to the velvet underground
back to the floor that i love
to a room with some lace and peper flowers
back to the gypsy...that i was...to the gypsy...that i was...

and it all comes down to you
well you know that it does, well...
lightning strikes...maybe once...maybe twice...
oh....and it lights up the night....
and you see your gypsy.......
you see your gypsy....

to the gypsy......
that remains.....
she faces freedom......
with a little fear.....
well i have no fear....
i have only love.....
and if i was a child....
and the child was enough.....
enough for me to love....
enough to love......

she is dancing away from you now
she was just a wish
she was just....a wish
and her memory is all that is left for you now
you see your gypsy.....
you see your gypsy.....

lightning strikes...
maybe once...maybe twice....
and it all comes down to you
oooooo......oh......well it all comes down to you....
lightning strikes...
maybe once....maybe twice....
oh.............
i still see your bright eyes......bright eyes...
and i've always loved you....
and it all comes down to you
it all comes down to you.....

post by Kijuiwin at Jan 6,2009 3:56pm

Ok this thread is just gay now.. to much man on this one.. This is the wrong forum for this kind of touchy stuff!

post by brian_dc

at Jan 6,2009 3:58pm

He said I'll love you 'til I die
She told him you'll forget in time
As the years went slowly by
She still preyed upon his mind

He kept her picture on his wall
Went half crazy now and then
He still loved her through it all
Hoping she'd come back again

Kept some letters by his bed
Dated 1962
He had underlined in red
Every single I love you

I went to see him just today
Oh but I didn't see no tears
All dressed up to go away
First time I'd seen him smile in years

(Chorus)
He stopped loving her today
They placed a wreath upon his door
And soon they'll carry him away
He stopped loving her today

(Spoken)
You know she came to see him one last time
Oh and we all wondered if she would
And it kept running through my mind
This time he's over her for good

(Repeat Chorus)

post by archaeon at Jan 6,2009 4:12pm

lol

post by timma at Jan 6,2009 4:40pm

Movin' to the country,
gonna eat a lot of peaches.
Movin' to the country
Gonna eat me a lot of peaches.

post by MarkFuckingRichards

at Jan 6,2009 6:36pm

brian_dc said	[orig][quote]
[Dec 23,2008 2:16pm - brian_dc] [Sep 6,2008 10:58am - MarkFuckingRichards] This wins the gayest thread on the entire internet award.

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